April 3, 2022

Wind Spell, By Kristen Baum DeBeasi

 


Wind Spell  

after Joy Harjo 


In the time before, it was never written down

 

No pens. A long line of mouths. A wolfman hovers 

beyond the tree line, taste of flesh on his tongue. 

A basket over a girl’s arm, crumbs fallen. 

 

The predator prowls the woods, 

the path, the outlying cottages. He eats 

every unfortunate passerby. What he cannot eat, 

he saves for later. He makes wine. Jars flesh. Waits. 

 

Rumors run like pigs. Like school children. 

Like a mother’s butterfly stomach, weighted 

for the wind’s howl. Like shortcuts loafing

toward full moon twilights. Like a basket 

inside a cottage door. A dandelion seed purchased

where there is no wind spell for wishes to float free. 

 

Wait! Not this once. Instead, try 

Once there was  

 

a woods that was only a woods. 

The village folk used to go birding, 

speak to owls, hear the throaty croak of ravens, 

listen for the songs of a nightingale. 

 

They had lived together, cooked together, 

whispering rumors of red sky mornings. 

They had tried to pretend a wolfman hadn’t moved in, 

grandmother’s cottage was under construction 

and the disappeared had left only damp shadows soaked into paths. 

 

But once again

Once upon another time

 

Memory failed and the forest shadows grew larger

and toothier with eyes sharp enough to see in the dark— 

the fallen fabric of a daughter’s red hood, the ribbon, 

the sash, a walking shoe wilting beside the path of pins 

the basket lined with cloth for protecting cakes 

 

Start with a different once! 

Once, after a lifetime lived inside the village walls 

 

grandmother had moved, longing 

for the seclusion of the forest. Trusting 

her granddaughter would come, she had left

the cottage door unlatched, curled up 

in her nightgown, recalling memories of trips made 

when she had been a girl. Choosing her path. Before 

 

If the girl in the red hood starts here 

she’ll never make it to the end of her story. 

 

Someone has to keep her eyes open, sings her grandmother 

to the day, to the night, to the wind spell

that can carry dandelion wishes to far-off places 

where it can seed into the heart’s loam 

and take root even as the girl walks 

the path of pins or that of needles. 

 

It would not matter. For even if grandmother was eaten, 

the girl would have the sense to escape. And she would 

find helpers along her journey home. 

 

Yes. Once upon this story. 

Kristen Baum DeBeasi’s poetry has appeared in Blue Heron Review, Contrary Magazine, Menacing Hedge and elsewhere. She was Moon Tide Press’s Poet of the Month for July 2021. When she isn’t writing words or music, she loves testing new recipes and collecting fallen leaves or twigs for her fairy garden.

Cover: Amanda Bergloff

Twitter @AmandaBergloff

Instagram: amandabergloff 

10 comments:

Ryan E. Holman said...

"Rumors run like pigs." I love this line and the conversational flow of this piece. Well done!

Kristen Baum DeBeasi said...

Thank you, Ryan. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Lynden Wade said...

Very evocative, Kristen! A great choice by Kate.

Deborah Sage said...

"The fallen fabric of a daughter’s red hood, the ribbon,

the sash, a walking shoe wilting beside the path of pins

the basket lined with cloth for protecting cakes" - So hauntingly beautiful with such rich imagery. I love it!

Kelly Jarvis said...

A hauntingly beautiful poem, Kristen <3

Kristen Baum DeBeasi said...

Thank you, Lynden, Deborah and Kelly. I'm so glad you find it haunting and evocative. <3

Katie Jordan said...

There are some great lines here. “ He makes wine. Jars flesh. Waits.” Love it!

Ari said...

I'm a great fan of Joy Harjo. You have an elegant frame of this/these narrative(s).

Sarah Garcia said...

Gorgeous imagery! Especially loved this:

"Rumors run like pigs. Like school children.

Like a mother’s butterfly stomach, weighted

for the wind’s howl."

Wonderful job with this poem!

Kristen Baum DeBeasi said...

Katie an Sarah--thank you! I'm glad to know the imagery you especially enjoyed. And Ari--thank you, too! Your feedback about this poem and how it is in conversation with Joy Harjo's excellent poem is greatly appreciated.

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